Changes!

After getting our first audience feedback, there were certain things that were made clear about what was good and bad about our media product. The main things we picked up on were:

• The narrative wasn't very understandable
• Some scenes went on for too long (Classroom scene)
• shots and scenes didn't work well together

As a new member of the group (Chantelle) joined, we all discussed our ideas and opinions about what we could do to improve what we have already. Our main idea was to:

• cut and add more scenes - This was an idea in which we would change our story board and film new shots/scenes
• use feedback to improve our work

During the final weeks of working, we would all work to make sure we completed all these changes. We now know that some more filming is needed as well as more editing and so we will continue to work to make sure we all share these responsibilities.