Initial Idea for Film

As we carried on disscussing ideas about our story, we gradually had a clearer idea based on:

A Teenage Girl called Hannah who becomes paranoid because of her surrounding and her foster parents.
Hannah' foster parents don't like her and want to find a way to get rid of her and they do this by driving her crazy
and playing with her mind and causing anxiety and paranoia. The foster Parents (Not yet named) start to put thoughts into Hannah' head and start to take control of her emotions, life and soon keep her feeling trapped and unwanted.

When Hannah decides to report her Foster parents to the police, they don't believe her because she has been reported
to police by her foster parents already! This then leads Hannah into becoming insane and causing herself to do bad things such as changing as a person and leading herself to kill her foster parents.

description: opening scene (draft)

-close up of leaves rustling through the wind
-gradually hearing footsteps
-Long shot of Hannah running
-A close up of Hannah turning around
-Police Sirens begin
-Hannah turns a corner and stops to take a breath
-Hannah pulls out a bloody knife from her pocket
-Hannah shakes in panic and drops the knife (Falls down)

(FADES OUT)
2 Weeks Earlier

-Extreme close up of Hannah' eyes
-School bells rings
-Hannah Meets up with her friends
-Hannah' friends ask if they can go to Hannah' House
-Hannah has a FLASHBACK (Hannah crying on her bedroom floor, as her foster parents start shouting and calling names at Hannah) FLASHBACK ENDS!
- Hannah reacts badly to the suggestion and starts to feel tense and yells at her friends
-Everything becomes too much and she runs out of school in tears (Hannah is unaware that she is mentally ill)

So far this is our brief idea of what we hope our film/story line will be about. Obviously there will be more detail as I update my blog after talking with my group and clarifying and making sure we are all happy with this story line.